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Pretty good...

You've really got something here. The only things I can comment on are that the opening gets a bit repetitive 0:45 to 1:36. There are a few melody changes but i think some instrumental change might help make it more enjoyable. Besides that it's a pretty good song and keep up the good work!
- SkyRiderX

Jasonatron responds:

I can see what you mean about the main section there. I guess I fell a little too in love with the growling bass. I could probably have lengthened the song as well, had I thrown different bits between the bass phrases. Thanks a lot for your feedback, it's much appreciated. :)

Good beats but..

You have some nice beats but you could defintely do alot more with them. For instance at 2:05 and 2:45 you have some build up but then it just dies down again or stays the same. I think if you expanded more on them and had used the build up to lead to a "BOOM" of melody it would sound alot better. Also 3:00 does not work too well with the change of instrument. I would chnage the synth or transition into better rather than just have the sudden change. Hope this review help you and i hope to hear more form you! Keep it up! XD
-SkyRiderX

punkmetalguy responds:

thanks for the advice mate:) i'll work on transitions better and how it could lead up to a "boom" xD

Could be better.

The song sounds pretty nice but has potential for alot more. You might want to watch the volume on the guitar and piano becuase they seem to be fighting on the foreground of the song which is kinda distracting from the melody. Try to harmonize them at bit better and i think it would sound alot better and try throwing some low string chords in there for backround maybe too but make sure that the piano and guitar won't power over them or else it'll ruin it.
Overall a decent song that could be something much more. Keep it up! XD

StevenWellson responds:

Thanks.

Nice Lyrics

So true...people don't realize how great hip-hop really is and how much fun it can be.

UselessTalent responds:

Ya dig and when we get together its nothin but love and fun

I live for Love and HipHop

YaDiggums

Thanks for the review stay up

Pretty good

It has a nice theme going but could be better. I would try adding some reverb to the snare and kick for some for ambient sound. I would also try to get some other instruments or smaples in there to try to mix it up a bit. I recomend a Flute or other woodwind but all in all it has a smooth sound. Nice job.

rogiferus responds:

Ambient is all about reverb this is a hybrid/experimental genre but yeah thanks for the review

Decent

Your opening was ok and could be better. Your samples tended to spike a bit during note changes and I think the snare coulda been a bit softer until the change. A little variation would help too. all in all a decent song. nice job.

Omega-Ravager responds:

Thanks for some constructive criticism!

Omega

Quite good

It had some nice beats but it did get a bit repetitive with the synths. I think that you might want to try mixing up your instruments a bit more. 1:00-1:22 was nice but after that it pretty much just went on repeat. Overall a decent song. Well done.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks:]

I might change the synths on one of the verses sometimes to make it slightly less repeditive, or add one.

Not Bad...

It's a nice melody and it carries very well however you might want to try to vary your instruments a bit more towards the end. Also don't leave the ending kinda just hanging like that. If it was meant to go into a loop you need to fix the transition a bit. Overall a decent song and worth a listen. Nice job dude.

Daiski responds:

Thanks for feedback. I agree with you in all aspects. Also organ arp part sounds like crap(0.39) and in the end there was glitch with vstplugin so it sounded right just one time.(2.24-2.27) Anyway, unfortunately i don't have this song in "true format" so i can't edit it anymore. It was miracle, i could transfer it from my old hard drive before it died.+) Anyway, big thanks for you comment. Im really appreciate it!

uhhh....

it's a nice beat but...it could use alot more work and a bit better quiality wouldn't hurt either..

Tails-Lock responds:

The quality sounds fine to me, and how does it need more work? I do agree that it needs more work, but a little more specification would be nice.

SkyRiderX here. I'm into alot of Game music composing as well composition for any other form of media. I also do voice acting and vocals on the side. If you ever want to collab or need someone to to make a custom track or to voicing just shoot me a messag

Joseph Zellerkraut @SkyRiderX

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Game Composer/Artist

Soaring high in the sky..

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